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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 7:52 am

http://solbladezex.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-Lineart-64717361

If theres anything wrong please let me know. I have a big problem with foreshortening and perspective. This is my first time drawing a proper body and the amount of time it has taken me to get it looking good enough for me was alot. xp

I've also posted this on the 'Official How To Draw Manga Guild'
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=10511331

Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:32 am

Very nice! I like the dynamic pose and the scarf moving around him. It gives a nice air of tension. smile

First thing I notice is though is that his head seems a little large for his body. The head is well drawn and the body proportions are good on its own, the proportion between the head and body though is a little off.

The dagger or kunai he's holding doesn't look right. Hang on... I think I have a reference page for those.

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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 9:03 am

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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 9:12 am

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Very nice! I like the dynamic pose and the scarf moving around him. It gives a nice air of tension. smile

First thing I notice is though is that his head seems a little large for his body. The head is well drawn and the body proportions are good on its own, the proportion between the head and body though is a little off.

The dagger or kunai he's holding doesn't look right. Hang on... I think I have a reference page for those.

Wowers thanks alot! blaugh

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Posted: Wed Sep 12, 2007 9:15 am

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Very nice! I like the dynamic pose and the scarf moving around him. It gives a nice air of tension. smile

First thing I notice is though is that his head seems a little large for his body. The head is well drawn and the body proportions are good on its own, the proportion between the head and body though is a little off.

The dagger or kunai he's holding doesn't look right. Hang on... I think I have a reference page for those.

Wowers thanks alot! blaugh

You're welcome. smile I actually ordered the How to draw Manga: Ninja & Samurai Portrayal book since I have a ninja character too. ^_^ Only drew him once though but haven't finished it yet.

Posted: Fri Sep 14, 2007 7:14 am

I've done it! You can find it in the gallery. I didn't have time to change the lineart though. sweatdrop

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