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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 11:27 am
hi guys! well i got some feedback so here's another chapter to the story.
CHAPTER 2:
I awoke and there was my mom watching my every move. I couldn't quite remember what had happened but all i knew was that my head hurt. And it hurt bad.
"Oh honey! Are you okay?", my mom exclaimed as i came back into consiousness. Next thing i knew is that my mom yelled for a nurse.
"Oh young Jeremy! I see your awake now. Well, let's get you some water and some medicine for your head. I'll be right back. Just lay down and try to stay awake until i come back.", the nurse said as she walked out. For the next five minutes my mom sat by my side and stoked my hair as she reminded me of what happened and why i was there. I nodded and at the end i stared at the wall and sighed.
"What's wrong honey? Are you in any pain or having trouble breathing?", his mom said with a worried expression on her face.
"Nothing mom, except this type of thing always happens to me. Did this ever happen to you when you were young mom?", Jeremy asked as he looked at his mom curiously. His mom looked at the celing trying to remember. She got a look on her face, but just as she was about to speak the nurse came back inside the room. Sje gave him some water and some advil for the pain in his head. He had stitches so he's have to be careful when brushing his hair, itching, washing his hair ect..... But, they wanted to keep him there a while to monitor him. They wanted to make sure he didn't have any fractures or anything. They said that if everything went well he could return home in two days. Later on i was just falling asleep, but then Rose walked in! She turned to the nurse who nodded and left the room. Rose looked around and then sat down in a chair across the room.
She looked around for a few minutes. Apparently he was the one who had to do the talking.
"So...... any particular reason why your here?", Jeremy asked trying not to sound rude. I mean besides his mom she was the only person who came to visit.
"The guys were wondering how you were doing. So was I. We were all getting worried, but the guys chickened out because they thought you would be mad at them so they decided not to show. They want me to tell them what your condition is.", She replied.
"I see. So, when did you guys call 911?", Jeremy asked.
"The guys didn't want to because they were scarred and you know how they don't really like you all that much. So, I did right after they were done complaining. Which, was in about a minute.", She replied.
So, maybe she did like Jeremy! He was happy about this thought. maybe there was somebody else outside his family that actually cared about him. That was until the guys showed up five minutes later. Then his thoughts were interupted........
So tell me what you guys think about this chapter. Anyways byez! and remember u only get another chapter if u like the chapters written.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 12:56 pm
----------------------------------------------------------------------------the gigantic tree is located in the center of the ballroom, beautifully decorated & surrounded with wonderful presents! xd ------------ 01. STKMisu from Meriko - gift02. Kiddo the fox-phoenix from Madame Solo - gift - gift03. Battleaxe from Cola Cola - gift04. Carandra from Candylover90 - gift05. Saga from Sheeory - gift06. Vorty from Pugnacioius Banana - gift - gift07. Mourning Dove from Meowmix24 - gift08. Risika7 from Sharpie5332 - gift09. Cola Cola from SweetAngelOokami - gift10. Pugnacious Banana from Jack-of-all-Spades - gift11. Candylover90 from Firething - gift12. sailoreclipse from Carandra - gift13. Lucca Ashtear from Enigma101 - gift14. meowmix24 from sailoreclipse - gift15. Jenru from Risika7 - gift16. Firething from [c o n f i g u r a t e] - gift17. Sharpie5332 from Battleaxe - gift18. Meriko from Kiddo the fox-phoenix - gift - gift - gift - gift19. Jack-of-all-Spades from Lucca Ashtear - gift20. Enigma101 from STKMisu - gift21. Potto The Magnificent from Neko-cat - gift22. Neko-cat from Vorty - gift23. Giabrenna from mourning dove - gift24. [c o n f i g u r a t e] from Potto The Magnificent - gift - gift - gift - gift - gift - gift25. TheQualityofMercy from Shianu - gift26. Sheeory from Giabrenna - gift27. Shianu from Jenru - gift - gift - gift - gift28. SweetAngelOokami from TheQualityofMercy - gift------------ for those of u who have not yet received ur present, please b patient whilst the latecomers finish up. 3nodding ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 12:57 pm
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:03 pm
Alright! *strolls in and sets a flute case down by the coat check* I'll be having to leave eventually to play at some church's Christmas eve services... please don't touch that, it's expensive.
And since I'm 21 now... time to hit the open bar! But first!
*lays an ambush to tackle-hug Madame Solo for the gooooorgeous edits* Thank you!
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:09 pm
*waltz through the door holding more presents and places them beneithe the giant tree* whee heart (shock if you want to add these to the list then do so) ^-^ To Shock: [x](i'm finishing up one more which i'll edit this post when its done)
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 1:12 pm
cries..i didn't get mine yet... *WAAHH* (and i won't be able to get online again for like a week.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 2:08 pm
Merry Christmas everyone biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 2:40 pm
Merry Christmas! *takes his gifts and stashes it* Prince Suuko! 4laugh
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 2:57 pm
Holy.... Meriko!
*looks around for Meriko*
*lies in wait to ambush*
it's... so awesome and beautiful... *tears up* crying heart
Oh... My edit will be done today... so no worries!
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 2:59 pm
*Shi walks in having finished at her other ball, walking over and picking up her gifts and opens then staring in wonder and suprise* Oh..oh my...Jenru... smile whee >> << >> *Will glomp him the first chance she gets* Merry Christmas to Everyone btw.
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 3:01 pm
Potto The Magnificent Merry Christmas! *takes his gifts and stashes it* Prince Suuko! 4laugh Merry Christmas, Potto biggrin
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 3:16 pm
Woo hoo! Thank you Shianu! *kicks Angelfire* I'll get that link fixed Sweet-promise!
whee
*Dances with some gingerbread*
Try this link instead. wink
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 3:17 pm
TheQualityofMercy Woo hoo! Thank you Shianu! *kicks Angelfire* I'll get that link fixed Sweet-promise!
whee
*Dances with some gingerbread* Hehe I was tempted to do Billy idol for ya...but...his hair scares me 0-0. merry Christmas ^^=
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 3:49 pm
;-; Everyone's edits are so pretty. exclaim *loves on Sakito edit* ^__^ heart Thanks!
Merry X-mas, peoples. heart
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Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 3:55 pm
Neko-cat Potto The Magnificent Merry Christmas! *takes his gifts and stashes it* Prince Suuko! 4laugh Merry Christmas, Potto biggrin 4laugh And that Gino in your sig is totally freakin' me out! eek
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